No it's ok. I'm a deep cover OSA agent who's racked up a lot of free auditing. That's all the help I need.
You used the stencil as a base for the work, or you draw up your real GF mask? You should had tried to get a nice black marker to do the lines, since it seems kind of dirty. Just sayin'. Apart of that, it's a nice start. <3
His drawing skills are only superior to your grammar skills. I don't see a lot of creativity if he's drawing like that. That drawing shows he hasn't yet learned the concept of dealing with forms and shape if he's using an outline and then shading inside of it like it's a coloring book. I think your standards for "EPIC" are very different than what the word actually means.